Feedback for Thriller Ideas

Today we shared our own individual's thriller opening idea with the class. I presented my idea and got some really useful feedback from Katie and my classmates. Firstly I wont be able to use a clown mask because its way too mainstream and our main producer, Matt, isn't particularly a fan of clowns either. The shot may not be able to shoot realistically as we need a dead body which is pretty hard to find a prop that will look super realistic. However, there were also some positive feedback such as the camera angle i decided to use in the car's trunk as it works nicely to create tension. Also the idea was quite simple and straightforward which will be an advantage when it comes down to shooting the actual opening sequence and editing them.